Comments for Brooklyn Star Entertainment http://www.brooklynstarentertainment.com Just another WordPress site Tue, 08 May 2012 15:55:21 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.2 Comment on NOT ALWAYS SLIPPERY WHEN WET by Sandra Larson http://www.brooklynstarentertainment.com/2012/05/not-always-slippery-when-wet/#comment-76 Sandra Larson Tue, 08 May 2012 15:55:21 +0000 http://www.brooklynstarentertainment.com/?p=364#comment-76 Thanks Debbie as always a good friend who will be honest with me. I will take the suggestions into consideration. Thanks again. Thanks Debbie as always a good friend who will be honest with me. I will take the suggestions into consideration. Thanks again.

]]> Comment on NOT ALWAYS SLIPPERY WHEN WET by Debbie http://www.brooklynstarentertainment.com/2012/05/not-always-slippery-when-wet/#comment-75 Debbie Tue, 08 May 2012 00:08:22 +0000 http://www.brooklynstarentertainment.com/?p=364#comment-75 Hi Sandy, Looks good, but here are a few things you might consider: repetition in words -- unless you planned that. i.e. up-and-coming could be aspiring duplication of up-and coming in the same sentence Maybe some spicing up from the thesaurus: actor/actress you want the best expose' (since you used head shot a lot throughout) musical group -- musical phenomenon Sentence that starts with Curious.... maybe end that with a question mark and then write: Visit their Facebook page at.... Just some ideas..hope it helps..good job Sandy... Hi Sandy,

Looks good, but here are a few things you might consider:

repetition in words — unless you planned that. i.e. up-and-coming could be aspiring

duplication of up-and coming in the same sentence

Maybe some spicing up from the thesaurus: actor/actress you want the best expose’ (since you used head shot a lot throughout) musical group — musical phenomenon

Sentence that starts with Curious…. maybe end that with a question mark and then write: Visit their Facebook page at….

Just some ideas..hope it helps..good job Sandy…

]]> Comment on GAS MASK NOT REQUIRED by J. Anthony D'Aguiar http://www.brooklynstarentertainment.com/2012/01/gas-mask-not-required/#comment-69 J. Anthony D'Aguiar Thu, 03 May 2012 01:32:19 +0000 http://www.brooklynstarentertainment.com/?p=207#comment-69 You have a lot to look forward to. We have a show coming up at the Orlando International Fringe Festival and will be posting the specifics this week. You have a lot to look forward to. We have a show coming up at the Orlando International Fringe Festival and will be posting the specifics this week.

]]> Comment on MIND READING by J. Anthony D'Aguiar http://www.brooklynstarentertainment.com/2012/04/mind-reading/#comment-68 J. Anthony D'Aguiar Thu, 03 May 2012 01:30:51 +0000 http://www.brooklynstarentertainment.com/?p=203#comment-68 We have a lot of great partners we will be introducing you from all genres of music. Keep checking back with us. We have a lot of great partners we will be introducing you from all genres of music. Keep checking back with us.

]]> Comment on LEGENDS IN OUR OWN MIND by J. Anthony D'Aguiar http://www.brooklynstarentertainment.com/2012/04/legends-in-our-own-mind/#comment-67 J. Anthony D'Aguiar Thu, 03 May 2012 01:25:02 +0000 http://www.brooklynstarentertainment.com/?p=194#comment-67 ROFL ROFL

]]> Comment on LEGENDS IN OUR OWN MIND by J. Anthony D'Aguiar http://www.brooklynstarentertainment.com/2012/04/legends-in-our-own-mind/#comment-66 J. Anthony D'Aguiar Thu, 03 May 2012 01:23:24 +0000 http://www.brooklynstarentertainment.com/?p=194#comment-66 Then you have a very dangerous Grandma. You might not want to eat those cookies. Then you have a very dangerous Grandma. You might not want to eat those cookies.

]]> Comment on SURFING CHANNELS by J. Anthony D'Aguiar http://www.brooklynstarentertainment.com/2012/04/surfing-channels/#comment-65 J. Anthony D'Aguiar Thu, 03 May 2012 01:17:15 +0000 http://www.brooklynstarentertainment.com/?p=176#comment-65 There is nothing wrong with escaping and television is a great way to do it. There is nothing wrong with escaping and television is a great way to do it.

]]> Comment on LEGENDS IN OUR OWN MIND by Lahla http://www.brooklynstarentertainment.com/2012/04/legends-in-our-own-mind/#comment-64 Lahla Wed, 02 May 2012 20:57:53 +0000 http://www.brooklynstarentertainment.com/?p=194#comment-64 Well, idk if i'd 'rather' read about superman over grandma, b/c if grandma bakes cookies by day, and wields a sword as an undercover ninja by night, then granny's got my interest for sure!!! :o) Well, idk if i’d ‘rather’ read about superman over grandma, b/c if grandma bakes cookies by day, and wields a sword as an undercover ninja by night, then granny’s got my interest for sure!!! :o )

]]> Comment on LEGENDS IN OUR OWN MIND by Loveta http://www.brooklynstarentertainment.com/2012/04/legends-in-our-own-mind/#comment-63 Loveta Wed, 02 May 2012 19:58:14 +0000 http://www.brooklynstarentertainment.com/?p=194#comment-63 No, I don't know granny's birthday. But sadly, I don't know what planet superman was born on either. Earth??? :) No, I don’t know granny’s birthday. But sadly, I don’t know what planet superman was born on either. Earth??? :)

]]> Comment on SURFING CHANNELS by Loveta http://www.brooklynstarentertainment.com/2012/04/surfing-channels/#comment-62 Loveta Wed, 02 May 2012 19:47:03 +0000 http://www.brooklynstarentertainment.com/?p=176#comment-62 Wow... those days were not that long ago, but seem so far away. We have come a long way. Best Wishes BE! Keep up the good work! Wow… those days were not that long ago, but seem so far away. We have come a long way. Best Wishes BE! Keep up the good work!

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